frosty trough—
the stars disappear
without names
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village well (EC)
the bucket full
of gossip
Editor’s Choices (EC) – Senryu
village well the bucket full of gossip Hifsa Ashraf, Pakistan There is a universality to Hifsa Ashraf’s poem. We all need water. So, we all need to consider a water supply. For many families, the convenience of piped water means they can access it simply by turning on a tap. For many others, life is not so convenient. In this piece, we are given the image of a village well. Although everyone is apparently there for the water, it is also a great meeting point (reminiscent of the water cooler in pre-COVID offices). I have been fortunate enough to see the community spirit around village wells in Asia. While I didn’t have a good handle on the language, it was clear there was plenty to talk about. Some conversations generated shouts and laughs, while others were conducted sotto voce. I’ve spoken to people who remember using a well in Europe. It seems to me that it wasn’t very long ago, in the grand scheme of things, when there were few alternatives to drawing water from your local well. For some, the role of the village well as a social hub is over, for others, that tradition continues.
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deep
in the lassi froth
family secrets
Cattails, October 2024 issue
http://www.cattailsjournal.com/issues/cattails242.pdf